Sunday, June 10, 2007

All I asked

All I asked,
Was for you to stay,
You gave no comfort,
You walked away...

All I asked,
Was for you to see,
The dreams we shared,
Of you and me...

All I asked,
Was for us to be,
All you said was,
No future you see...

All I asked,
Was for you to try,
But you chose to leave,
You said goodbye...

-Celia

2 Comments:

At June 15, 2007 at 12:02 PM , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Your poetry is very beautiful. It has a very bluesy feel to it. It is the kind of poetry which makes you smile. :)

 
At July 1, 2007 at 11:08 AM , Blogger freezes.over said...

Well written...somehow it has that touch of honesty, like it's such a personal experience...yet it leaves room to think of it as sweet peotic imagination!!

 

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